First Paper

I've officially received my first grade for my first college paper. I'm not satisfied with it, but I can live with it. I made a B. I thought that I would of did a little better than a B, but I know I must improve if I want to obtain an A for the next paper. This first paper really showed me that I need to improve on some things in my writing. I also need to let more than one person critique my paper. The next paper I have to do is a textual analysis on an ad. I plan on making an A on this one because that's all I settle for. I know I have to improve on the things that I missed on my first paper. So bloggers I'll be back and let you know how I did on the textual analysis